[Suikoden] Small Wonders.

An old story, last modified 11/20/2003; I meant to finish it, but looking at it now, I don't think I will.  There are ideas here that can be used for another story that I fully intend to finish.

This is a series of scenes that take place at different times in the life Luc and Sarah shared together.  They alternate between Luc's contemplation and scenes that involve dialog, interaction, et cetera.  It begins with her childhood and ends with their death at the ceremonial ruins.

I had an idea and I was inspired, so I tried to finish as quickly as possible and get all of the ideas down.  As a result, there's at least one scene that's mostly dialog and lacks description, and the last scene is not what I'd like it to be.  This is all unedited, of course, so the sentences might be convoluted, repetitive, or tell more than show. 

( Children can soften the hardest of hearts. )

I still really like this idea, even though the writing needs a lot of editing.  My perception of Luc's character has also changed since writing this, so it's slightly inaccurate.  The last few lines are probably confusing; the missing word is 'soul.'  'Love' would also work well, but I was already skirting the line.  ^^