Jul. 9th, 2005

runiclore: (Angel)
If I submitted this to a critique circle, the first comment would be, "You should show us, not tell us - turn these paragraphs into scenes."  Since I don't intend to turn this into a story, you get to be told, not shown.  If this little exercise doesn't work, maybe I'll take that piece of advice and try again.

All I want is for Asen to exist for me as more than a name.  It can only help me later in the SPPM timeline.

It was hard to believe he had opposed their creation. )

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